I'm combating the washed-out scan problem by just really boldening up the drawing before I scan it. Because I'm a problem solver, damnit.
Anyway, this page is a lot of text. Sorry bout that. The next page is gonna be pretty talk-heavy too and I haven't written the page after that so who knows what it's going to be like. Probably not so much talking coz I want to draw something interesting.
That came out a lot darker. No washed out greys here. ComicFury would call that “Flawless Victory!” Andrea. :-) Excellent problem solving skills. ;-) As far as having too much text, sometimes you need that to tell the story. There’s some interesting conflict there. That’s fantastic.
Anyway, this page is a lot of text. Sorry bout that. The next page is gonna be pretty talk-heavy too and I haven't written the page after that so who knows what it's going to be like. Probably not so much talking coz I want to draw something interesting.